Thursday, December 18, 2008

Current Brochure for Your Message Doctor

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Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Sample Signature

Here's the guy's current email signature.
Honest, Very Affordable, Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services….Period.

I would say ...

Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services -
Honest. Affordable. Period.

OR ... I might like to see it like this:

Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services -
Affordable. Honest. Period.

___________________________________

This was a little freebie for a new guy in the network group.
He liked the second one better. Me too.
Sometimes it's just a nuance thing.
Sometimes it makes the message loud and clear.

ER - It's no accidnt ....


That's exactly what I said to the guy that wrote this line. He's a member of a networking group I'm with. No reason to call him out on it. It was probably just an .... WAIT! He could have prevented this.

Proofread - it's what I do. Let's do more.

Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Testimonial

David, you are the best!

I very much appreciate your time as you sift through my message and make your gentle corrections. It makes my message a bit more clear to the reader and of course that's always a very good thing.

Thanks once again,
Sandy

Proofreading and editing blog posts

Sandy Walden writes. And she feels she needs a fresh set of eyes to look over her stuff.
It takes some of the pressure off. I'm glad I can be here to help.
She wrote it all and I made a few comments.

Here's our first work together. Simple. Just a few minutes. It helps.
Click on it to read the sample.

She also coaches. Call her. You can feel better, too.

Serenity Life Coaching
Sandy Walden
www.SandyWalden.com
(414) 378-8764











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