I could not pass up the opportunity to add this to the Emergency Room. It is straight off a popular listing board; edited only to remove identifying marks.
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I am in search for a part-time job considering the fact that I get out of school at 3:45. I am great at fast paste jobs and my Communication skills is a +.I am willing to learn and be open minded. I have past exp volunteering at the ..... ..... Museum for 1 1/2 and most of my tasks involved fast paste. My name if ____ I’m 18 and I would love to work for you.
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Seems like what's-her-name might get a gig a little quicker with a little proofreading help.
Wednesday, January 7, 2009
Thursday, December 18, 2008
Tuesday, December 9, 2008
Sample Signature
Here's the guy's current email signature.
Honest, Very Affordable, Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services….Period.
I would say ...
Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services -
Honest. Affordable. Period.
OR ... I might like to see it like this:
Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services -
Affordable. Honest. Period.
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This was a little freebie for a new guy in the network group.
He liked the second one better. Me too.
Sometimes it's just a nuance thing.
Sometimes it makes the message loud and clear.
Honest, Very Affordable, Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services….Period.
I would say ...
Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services -
Honest. Affordable. Period.
OR ... I might like to see it like this:
Automotive, Computer and Handyman Services -
Affordable. Honest. Period.
___________________________________
This was a little freebie for a new guy in the network group.
He liked the second one better. Me too.
Sometimes it's just a nuance thing.
Sometimes it makes the message loud and clear.
ER - It's no accidnt ....
That's exactly what I said to the guy that wrote this line. He's a member of a networking group I'm with. No reason to call him out on it. It was probably just an .... WAIT! He could have prevented this.
Proofread - it's what I do. Let's do more.
Tuesday, December 2, 2008
Testimonial
David, you are the best!
I very much appreciate your time as you sift through my message and make your gentle corrections. It makes my message a bit more clear to the reader and of course that's always a very good thing.
Thanks once again,
Sandy
I very much appreciate your time as you sift through my message and make your gentle corrections. It makes my message a bit more clear to the reader and of course that's always a very good thing.
Thanks once again,
Sandy
Proofreading and editing blog posts
Sandy Walden writes. And she feels she needs a fresh set of eyes to look over her stuff.
She also coaches. Call her. You can feel better, too.
It takes some of the pressure off. I'm glad I can be here to help.
She wrote it all and I made a few comments.
She wrote it all and I made a few comments.
Here's our first work together. Simple. Just a few minutes. It helps.
Click on it to read the sample.
Click on it to read the sample.
She also coaches. Call her. You can feel better, too.
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