Hi S_____ D_________,
Thanks for making your free report available. I have recently decided that I want more speaking opportunities and have begun seeking that.
And, one of the things I do, as Your Message Doctor, is heal the message.
In your free report, you wrote:
Bad News Item #1 Less Speaking Engagements
If you are a speaker, you probably already know this, so its
not news to you, but there are less paid speaking
engagements / opportunities than at any time in memory.
I got to this paragraph on page 4 and decide to stop and write you this note. There may be fewer speaking engagements, but there are not less speaking engagements. Saying it right makes it easier to believe you and the program you're selling.
How long has it been since your last check-up?
Your Message Doctor at your service.
Thank you.
DLW
David L. White
YourMessageDoctor.com
Freelance writer, editor, proofreader
1-800-642-9050 • 414-282-7185
Monday, June 15, 2009
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