Hi M___ S___,
Thanks for the follow on Twitter - @davidlwhite
I went to your website and saw this boo-boo immediately.
"We will be up and running soon! If you wish to conatact us ... "
http://tinyurl.com/nw8aw9
Finding and fixing boo-boo's is my specialty.
And rather than NOT engage with you, like so many will when
they see careless things like this in your sales message, I will
share this with you in the hope that we can work together.
We all need someone to check up on us.
The Doctor is operating.
Regards,
David L. White - YourMessageDoctor.com
Freelance writer, editor, proofreader
http://www.linkedin.com/in/yourmessagedoctor
1-800-642-9050 • 414-282-7185
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